Wednesday, April 23, 2008

Crimson Desire: Corrections

After doing testruns with audiences, we decided we definitely needed to correct the banner and state explicitly that its Valentine's.

We compressed the rapid sequence of past killings, to make it more rapid and so we don't lose audience attention by repetition of the same thing over n over. To make its POINT, to pack a punch, we made this even more flashing and rapid.

We also removed the two Rebecca's from the rapid sequence as it seemed to confuse audiences.

The general however was successful the first time round and remains.

We are thrilled about how the song and video have fit perfectly and all our hard work turned out well in this artistically dark piece.

Personally I am thrilled at the result and how I have managed to cover the very sweet side of Valentine's (in Assignment 3) and the very dark side (in Assignment 5).

1 comment:

Julian said...

The journal is clear and comprehensive for Crimson Desire. I think you like this a lot.